Here, we actually roleplay. It's really simple; just prompt somewhere within the world of IceClan or the ??? Wolf Pack, and I'll pick up as soon as possible. Just try not to get miffed if I delete your comment when things get overfull; I need to make sure you don't have to scroll too much to look at everything if you're new. :) I know that some of my older roleplays died, got out of control or both, but I promise that I'll try to keep this one more controlled, and if someone is too busy to roleplay, I'll just do back-and-forth with my own characters, waiting on someone else to make a move.
Also, if you enter your character into the roleplay, that's basically saying that you approve of me using your character in my Warriors fanfic about IceClan, the Tribe of Gentle Breezes, the ??? Wolf Pack and the legendary FireClan simply called the New Destiny. Include the password "Hawkstep" somewhere in your first post to indicate you are letting me use your character to my own discretion in the New Destiny, it doesn't matter where. However, one you give me permission, that decision is permanent, so be careful!
Just remember...
If you are gone for over three months, I'll delete your character from the continuity so that loose ends aren't hanging. However, if you come back, all of your character data will be saved, and you can recover your character. No worries! :)
And don't forget the Warrior Code that governs the very actions of both StarClan and IceClan. Some of the rules apply to non-Clan creatures, but not necessarily all of them.
Have fun, and don't be afraid to lead your cat to drive the outsiders out..
Or help them take over...
Froststar padded in circles around her nest of moss, twigs and leaves. She racked her memory for her full past, as she had done for several sunrises now, but as usual, it lay just beyond her grip. She hissed and kicked the leaves in frustration, then glanced out.
ReplyDeleteNobody, as far as she knew, had noticed her fit.
She sighed with relief and trudged out, seeing if anybody were doing anything in camp.
Talonpaw ran in laughing and playing, chasing a butterfly, she stopped and looked up at froststar "hello froststar" she lowerd her head respectfully
ReplyDeleteFroststar smiled.
Delete"Hello, Talonpaw. I can see you're having fun today."
She paused, thinking of what to say.
"Hmm.. do you want to help me with something? We have quite a lot of duties needed to be filled."
(I hope I'm playing the leader role well, and I'll add your character Talonpaw.)
"Of course ill help you...what do you need?" She padded around the nest and looked at froststar
Delete"Talonpaw, I know that your mentor wouldn't want you to come out of camp, but I think I would like to show you the ropes of hunting." Froststar said, crouching down to Talonpaw's eyelevel. She wasn't really busy at the moment, and wanted to make sure that every cat in her camp was well trained.
Delete(Hey Talonpaw, you don't have to tell me, but who would you like to be apprenticed to?)
"oohh great!! thanks froststar i cant wait!!!"
Delete(preferably the clan med-cat, as my character is based on a med-cat apprentice!)
(We don't have a med cat yet, which I'm sure you know ( :) ), but I'll do my best to get you apprenticed to him/her.)
DeleteFroststar mrrowed with appreciation for the young apprentice's vigor, and padded back into her den to think about where to go hunting.
*talonpaw runs out of the den, still chasing the butterfly, a small while later froststar hears a yowl of dismay and hissing*
Delete“Talonpaw? TALONPAW? Are you okay?" Froststar yowled. She loped out of her den, eyes wide. Nearby, a warrior snickered.
Delete"Apprentices. So naive."
"black fur is stuck on the warriors claws* *talonpaw is cowering n a dark corner, afew scratches are seen over her sleek black fur*
Delete(if thats okay ;))
DeleteBrown uneasily lay in his den of twigs, moss, brambles, mud, leaves and other things, murmuring things under his breath. He was slender and strong yet not starved, and some somewhat invisible scars covered his body. He yearned to see Froststar again, his dear Froststar, when they would meet that night at moonhigh. He picked up the scent of a wolf nearby, but didn't run out to fight. He'd had a run-in with a different wolf two days before, and it hadn't turned out well.
ReplyDelete(It's okay.)
ReplyDelete"Talonpaw! Talonpaw! What happened?"
The fur on Froststar's haunches rose on end as she loped towards him.
i..w..was just c..chasing dat butterfly..and i rand into him..den he pinned me down and scratched me *talonpaw whimpers in fear*
DeleteFroststar's fur bristled as she moved her tail angrily at the black tom.
Delete"In ten seconds, hairball, explain to me why you are attacking an apprentice, and give me a good reason, too." she hissed. Her eyes glared at the cat with raw anger, for she believed in Ice's ideals of a non-corrupt clan without the flaws of normal civilizations. Sure, she'd used the word "hairball", but only because attacking an apprentice was lowly, even if a wolf did it.
(You can control the tom if you'd like, Talonpaw. :) )
*the tom shrugged* "she ran into mr, the impudent lil thing, apprentices should be dealt with harshly, and lern some manners"
Delete*talonpaw is now hiding behind froststar*
"I always listen to each side of the debate before giving my verdict, but I believe Talonpaw is no more than twelve moons old. Even if I am incorrect, I only give capable cats harsh punishment for their actions, not kits, apprentices or elders. State your business and where you come from, or face my claws."
DeleteFroststar flexed her claws for effect, her fur on end and heart pounding.
"huh, i actually came to give you a message..but the incompetent APPRENTICE distracted me and now ive forgotten" *the tom unsheathes his claws*
Delete(Hey, is it okay if I use Talonpaw in a Warriors fanfic I want to write?)
DeleteThe fur around Froststar's neck foofed up even more.
"I would've loved to listen to your message, and to gain more wisdom while trying to help you. But you have done bodily harm to one of my friends, apprentice or not. Leave, or do I have to make you?" she hissed frostily.
While Frostlily had wanted to add a "please" in there, she'd realized at the last moment that it would make her seem weak, and as so, bit back the words. She did a quick prayer to StarClan to forgive her.
(that's fine)*the toms fur bristled, but he then walked out of camp* "sure..ill go.." *talonpaw shivered and looked up at you* th..thank you!
Delete(Great! :D)
Delete"If you feel like apologizing under a flag of truce, you're welcome in our camp!" Froststar cried after the mysterious tom.
She turned back to Talonpaw, and her expression softened.
"I'll go ask Whitetail why he didn't detect the intruder faster, since he's a great scenter. I don't like to delay our hunting trip, but it has to happen, since I'm leader."
Froststar padded off to the camp entrance, where a white tom stood watch on the cliff.
*the to had already gone when froststar shouted*
Deleteoh..okay froststar...*talonpaw turned to pad back to the medical den*
Froststar and Whitetail seemed to have a very animated discussion with some snarling, yowling, tense muscles, unsheathed claws and tail gestures that were probably very rude. She came down the slope grumpily and went into the medical den.
DeleteInside the medical den, alcoves were stocked to the brim with herbs and vials of mouse bile and honey over five fox-lengths high, with sturdy toadstools and paw-holds in the cavern side winding around the alcoves. Sun filtered in through the lichen and moss covering of the den and through the top, but there was no medicine cat on duty. Fluffy nests sat there, devoid of any warmth.
*talonpaw padded in looking for a herb for her scratches* "oh, hello froststar...your not hurt are you?, what happened with whitetail??"
DeleteFroststar licked her fur, her pose exhausted, and her eyes dull with stress. She looked at Talonpaw, then took a deep breath.
Delete"I'm not hurt, Talonpaw, but I appreciate your concern. Whitetail said he was sorry about his failure as guard and deputy, but he also said that I should appoint more guards instead of just him and Shadowpine."
Froststar snorted.
"As if I'd expend our small amount of warriors' energy for something we barely even need!"
She glanced at the medicinal stores. A few cobwebs were carefully laid in an alcove, luckily not sticking to anything.
"We might be risking infection, but should be try some cobwebs if you are bleeding?" Froststar mewled.
*talonpaw nodded* thats what i was thinking, i just wanted to check over our herbs anyway, *she picked up a small amount of cobweb and put it on her cut* im sure ill be fine
DeleteFroststar nodded solemnly, then turned away and left the den.
Delete*talonpaw shivers and moves her tail, looking at a deep wound at the base of it, where the tom had grabbed her and began putting cobweb on it*
ReplyDelete"that was close..."
Froststar sat on the soft sand in the middle of the ravine, and sighed.
Delete"I think its a good idea to show Talonpaw Manystones. When I was an apprentice, it was the highlight of my apprenticeship. And it wouldn't hurt to patrol the southern borders while we're there..."
She trailed off as Shadowpine padded into the clearing. The sleek black she-cat's luminous green eyes seemed tired, yet had an impish gleam to them.
"Was there any sign of Lycaon and his wolves near our border?" she asked, flicking her tail nervously.
"There was a scent trail and a few rabbit bones," Shadowpine mewled. "But the scent was stale, at least three days old, and it led back towards the wolves' camp. We should be safe for now."
Froststar nodded solemnly.
"Make sure everybody stays in camp tonight. I suspect we're going to be facing a storm. Tell Rosepaw and Minnowpaw to go out with Whitetail for some fresh-kill and patch up the thorn bushes around us."
Shadowpine nodded slightly, and turned away to do as Froststar requested.
*talonpaw is quietly walking to the apprentice den for some rest, trying to stay unseen*
DeleteFroststar (hereafter referred to as Eaglestar) padded towards the edge of the ravine, where she leapt onto a jagged outcrop on the crack leading to the leader den.
Delete"May all cats who can catch their own prey gather below the Highrock for a Clan meeting!" she yowled.
*talon hears the call, and turns around, slinking to the back of the gathering*
Delete(Duhnit, I forgot what I originally wanted to say...)
Delete"You all know very well that Talonpaw has not yet been apprenticed," Eaglestar began. "She has been training for a while by several different cats exchanging sessions, but she does not have a clear mentor to ask questions or to train under. She, however, professed her interest in herbs to me a while back, and I am proud to announce that she'll be apprenticed to our new medicine cat, Willowfeather!"
The cream she-cat with green eyes and black ears and paws padded forward, her eyes shining. She approached Talonpaw, as she had recently been made medicine cat to fill in for the former med cat, Snailshell, who had gone to StarClan without an apprentice.
*talon stood nervously and padded to greet her mentor*
DeleteWillowfeather gave Talonpaw a friendly lick on the shoulder, then brushed her back with her bushy tail. "I hope to teach you about medicinal ways as much as I can," she murmured in her ear.
DeleteThe crowd dispersed as more and more cats realized a storm was coming soon, and a few whispers could be heard.
Eaglestar leapt down from the Highrock.
"Talonpaw, you may sleep in the medicine den whenever you want to. But shall we go hunting now?"
thank you willowfeather..
Deleteyes please eaglestar
Eaglestar nodded. "Let's go before it starts to rain. Where would you like to hunt?"
Deletei really dont mind, i havnt been out of camp before, so im not too sure..
DeleteEaglestar nodded slowly. and began to pad out of camp. "Okay, just follow me then."
Deleteokay *she follows*
DeleteThey go through thick forest and take a walk around the territory perimeter, then arrive at a clearing. Ahead, a large area of stones looms, with water trickling between them.
Delete"Manystones," Eaglestar says. "An ancient glacier once was here, and it left behind a bunch of sediment, making this moraine."
wow! amazing!
DeleteEaglestar nodded, then crept away, tasting the air. Moments later she dipped down into the grass, her tail barely poking out above the grass stalks.
Delete*talonpaw watches intently*
DeleteEaglestar's tail was erect yet downcast, telling Talonpaw to get down. She then raised it slowly and silently, telling her to be silent. She crept forward without a sound, her whiskers quivering as she did it, making sure she was downwind of her prey.
DeleteCloser... and closer..
Eaglestar pounced, her paws knocking over a squealing rabbit. She finished off the plump hare with a swift bite to the spine.
*talonpaw watched in awe*
DeleteEaglestar brought the rabbit over to Talonpaw. "Remember, the weak must always be fed before the fit. This is part of the Warrior Code." Eaglestar buried the rabbit with some stones carefully, then flicked her tail at Talonpaw. "Now you try."
Deleteokay! *talonpaw looked around, trying to find prey scent, then crouches low like eaglestar had shown her, slowly creeping to a mouse, then pounced suddenly, her small size allowing her to move faster and finished off the mouse with a bite to the neck*
Delete"Wow, you're good!" Eaglestar exclaimed. "I have never seen or heard of an apprentice so good as hunting as you do. Not even Owl Eyes was as good as you were!" Surprised that a med cat apprentice who had never left camp before could hunt so well, she kept on gushing.
Delete*TalonPaw (from now on, known as AmberPaw) blushed under her black pelt at the praise* its just insticnt...im sure anycat could do the same..
Delete*she looked down at her white front paws*
"Well, Amberpaw, I think we should be going back to camp now... Let's take our fresh-kill to the pile, then move the pile into a dry corner. A storm is coming." Thunder crackled as Eaglestar spoke, accenting her words.
Delete*amberpaw flinched at the thunder* okay eaglestar...*she picked up the mouse she had caught*
DeleteEaglestar rushed off to the camp as sheets of rain started to fall. She was too concerned with making sure IceClan would be okay to remember to make sure Amberpaw was following her.
Delete*amberpaw struggled to keep up, getting lost she was unknowingly running straight towards a thunderpath, the sick screach of a mosnter coming off the tunderpath could be heared*
DeleteA Twoleg with reddened eyes was in the belly of the monster, his head limp as his paws lay slack on a round flower inside the monster. The Twoleg glanced at Amberpaw for a moment, then said something in a slur and the monster feebly tried to get back on the Thunderpath, but began to skid and spin on the slippery grass.
Delete*amberpaw laid, her paw crushed, she mewed feebly, unable to move, she stared at the Twoleg in the monsters belly*
DeleteThe Twoleg was unconscious, his head cracked on the round flower of the monster and blood barely concealing his glazed eyes. The monster was smoking as it stood still, its ugly face dented and its ugly back crumpled as its face hugged the stump and the tree the monster had veered into's trunk lying on the monster's back. The rain poured on.
Delete(New chain?)
(Above comment was me, I just accidentially used a different account. Whoops.)
Delete(haha, that alright and, okay)
Delete*Amber mewed desperatly, still keeping an eye on the monster, asif expecting it to wake up any minute*
"help! anycat?! help me!"
*she stared at the blood on the twolegs face, then at the monsters dented metallic pelt*
A dark silohuette appeared in the storm, grabbing Amber by the scruff and attempting to drag her to camp. "The monster is dead," the shadowy tom said around her fur. "I'll get you to safety."
Delete*amberpaw mewled in surprise, then stopped, wondering if she could trust the tom* "who in starclans name are you?!"
Delete"Brown," the tom replied simply. "And its better if you don't know." He kept on scrabbling at the earth as he tried to get back to camp.
DeleteBack at camp, Eaglestar was getting ready to assemble a search party for Amberpaw, but the rain was too heavy for her to even get outside her den.
*Amberpaw hung from the toms jaws, lifting up her injured paw to keep it out of the way*
Delete"there might be an easyer way further down,,"
Brown kept on dragging Amberpaw along, apparently ignoring her, but he managed to set up a good pace through the woods as the ravine grew closer and closer.
Delete*she blinked, wincing as her paw hit the ground as he dargged her up*
DeleteBrown kept on trying to drag Amberpaw to her den, his muscles straining under her weight.
Delete*amberpaw mewed loudly, hoping to alert one of the camp patrols to help*
DeleteEaglestar just barely overhead the mew over the din of the squall, but she was unable to help or call to the warrior's den for aid. She watched helplessly as the rain grew thicker and thicker, and a rushing sound could be heard.
Delete*a strong looking black tom padded up to browns side*
Delete'need some help??'
((i hope its ok, ive got a second oc who is a rouge, but friendly, his name is falcon))
TalonPaw, I got an email that said you commented, but I can't find the comment. Please reply to this comment. :)
ReplyDelete((hey, sorry, my internet is just retarded XD))
DeleteIts okay, my internet can act up sometimes too. XD
DeleteAmberpaw, Orchirdpaw and others, please make a comment that says "Hawkstep" if you are okay with me using your character in stories I write.
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ReplyDeleteeaglestar, im not seeing any comments from you?is this still running?
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